Tuesday, January 24, 2012

I need help naming my wedding poem,?

Two doves perchèd upon the throne of God

Fore’er indebted in wedlock’d bond.

True love cannot be measured with a rod .

Like ripples on the Lord’s celestial pond.

Bouquet of wild aster both shall pick

In gardens, both share harvest of their love

with children who will compliment them quick

We bless them both with light from Heav’n above

As love has taken hold on man and wife

And may that bond be blessèd with glad cheer

Together they will start their Christian life

And let us not shed ev’n single tear

Loves purity is like the fallen snow

Part not until they tread where angels go.
I need help naming my wedding poem,?
Where Angels Go sounds perfect for a title. When i title my poems i like to leave my audience with something to remember. Often, the last thing said is often the first thing remembered.
Reply:Holy Unity
Reply:"To the paradise of love"
Reply:"Two Doves" comes to mind for a title. You could also just have a title like, "To [spouse] with love, from [you]."



It's a beautiful poem, by the way. God has given you a wonderful gift to be able to write as beautifully as that.
Reply:Sounds like a Sonnet. I like it. How about:



God's Blessing

God's Grace

Blessed Bond

Forever Blessed
Reply:Forever



that is soooo sweet!

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